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  Mini#32 Monochrome, 2016
Entry 18 of 42
   
 
Old jetty       ©2016 babysister
Panasonic DMC-GX7       18th place, 58 points
1/400s, f8, ISO 200, 27mm, Normal Program, Pattern, no flash
 
Post-Processing: Converted to mono. Slight crop and increased light. Decreased exposure in sky. Levelled.       Extra Info: Retained for its history.
 
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Anthony Comyn
Mar 8, 2016
    I think you had a good original image, just the processing was a bit off. I did a rework on your original (hope you don't mind) and then posted it in the outtakes... See if you like, if so I will detail what i did... Would still like to know what software you used though.

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ysal
Mar 7, 2016
    I think the blacks are not dark enough. It looks washed out. Great composition though.

Mepo
Mar 7, 2016
    The tones in the sky match the tones on the pilings which flattens out the image. I think a levels adjustment for the pilings would have helped, especially by increasing the blacks. I see you have chosen to put the horizon across the centre of the image. It's usually better along either third.

Lo
Mar 7, 2016
    I think you have the makings of a really amazing shot. I Like the centred composition and the shooting angle that almost eliminates the shoreline directly opposite. The contrast lets it down though; there's an overall greyness that robs the photo of detail and tonality.

artsy
Mar 6, 2016
    There is something so foreboding in black and white, that you would probably would not notice in its natural state

Elyod
Mar 6, 2016
    Great shot, has an almost opaque quality to it. High on my list.

kerszkavet
Mar 6, 2016
    really interesting shot. highlights are a touch bright for me.

I'd be interested to see the colour version in outtakes.

aoc46
Mar 6, 2016
    Interesting subject, good composition, but over-exposed - blown highlights plus very few tonal values in the dark-to-black range.

Jade O.
Mar 5, 2016
    Almost seems like a negative image but even more striking because it isn't.

Anthony Comyn
Mar 5, 2016
    Lovely scene, lots of interest, even the centred horizon could work, but there is something strange with the processing here. The murky / haziness is a distraction, which unfortunately overpowers the good things about the photo.

forkcandles
Mar 5, 2016
    the finished look like a print which was not washed properly
like the composition
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