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  #170 Rule of Thirds, Again
Entry 19 of 26
   
 
brunch       ©2016 artsy
Panasonic DMC-ZS35       19th place, 57 points
1/30s, f4.9, ISO 1600, 71mm, Shutter Priority, Pattern, no flash
 
Post-Processing: used a dark background to bring out the whites, cropped and re-sized.       Extra Info: None
 
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Amberbug
Apr 18, 2016
    Nice Set up. A little soft on my computer unless that was done on purpose.
Edited on Apr 18, 2016

Anthony Comyn
Apr 18, 2016
    The black bag is not doing it for me. The shadow is also very purple...Hope it was tasty...

Lo
Apr 18, 2016
    A nice idea for the challenge with good use of colour. Too bad the floral arrangement is cropped. The horizontal reflection off the material at right draws the eye away.

ysal
Apr 17, 2016
    I think this was a good attempt. I think it would have been better if 1) the stuff along the left edge was cloned out, 2) there a bit more room above the flower, and 3) the glass bottle was vertical.

artsy
Apr 16, 2016
    Thanks for the comments, but there is no thrash bag, simply a black taffeta drape, picking up some of the colours. I rather like the pale mauve cloth, to complete the complementary colour scheme. Comments are welcome

aoc46
Apr 16, 2016
    The still life with the flower and items on plate has a lot of potential, but is that a trash bag barely visible on the right, put there to receive the broken eggs? What about the green poking in from the left? And the purple shadow suggests a lighting issue. The composition overall does fits well with the Rule of Thirds, however.

Old Finn
Apr 16, 2016
    Maybe I would have turned that can to point to the right side.

forkcandles
Apr 15, 2016
    the colour of the eggshell and its shadows is stunning and makes this entry stand out

davemisunas
Apr 15, 2016
    nice still life.. good lighting and use of 1/3 rule... in my TT.

SteveBee
Apr 14, 2016
    Looks like you are practicing for Challenge #171. Watch the edges of the frame. Bright green on left edge. Bright flowers too close to edge. Also overall balance could be better.
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