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  #171 Emotional Still Life
Entry 17 of 26
   
 
wilted       ©2016 RobertLavker
Panasonic DMC-GX7       17th place, 36 points
6s, f7.1, ISO 125, 56mm, Aperture Priority, Pattern, no flash
 
Post-Processing: levels; decrease shadows, decrease highlights, increase contrast; unsharp mask       Extra Info: None
 
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jomari
May 9, 2016
    The flowers and the vase would work well but I feel that the background clutters the image and competes with the subject too much.

aoc46
May 9, 2016
    Nice colors but background behind the flowers is a major distraction.

Old Finn
May 9, 2016
    Nice picture. Maybe would have been still better if the table cloth would have been moved a bit to the right side. In my favorites.

leanneqld
May 9, 2016
    The background is distracting. I'm not getting any kind of emotion.

ysal
May 8, 2016
    The table cloth being off-center is distracting. I do like to overall colors.

Anthony Comyn
May 8, 2016
    The hanging on the wall is a bit too much, distracts from the flowers. I like the illusion created by the cloth on the table. If you were going for sadness, it kind of works, but I would be more sad by the action of cutting it from the plant in the garden... I get the symbolism you were going for though.

kerszkavet
May 8, 2016
    Nice texture on the flowers, and clear emotional content. Well balanced highlights / shadows on the flowers.
Good to have difference in stages of wilting.
The wall hanging intrudes too much, maybe owing to the f7.1 setting - or a blank background would have helped concentrate on the flowers

Elyod
May 7, 2016
    Well expressed.

forkcandles
May 6, 2016
    the traditional idea of still life
wheres the fruit

SteveBee
May 5, 2016
    Busy, busy. Simplify. Plain background so the subject isn't competing with the rest.
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