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  #212 Your Favorite Shots Of This Challenge Period
Entry 18 of 22
   
 
Clouds over Clunes       ©2019 jomari
Panasonic DMC-FZ70       17th place, 23 points
1/2000s, f4.5, ISO 100, 48mm, Landscape, Pattern, no flash
 
Post-Processing: Crop, Topaz Adjust, Topaz Detail, Topaz Denoise       Extra Info: None
 
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Lo
Feb 24, 2019
    I find the sky a bit overwhelming, but I am really impressed by the detail and colour that you have managed to bring out of it. The reflections off the car add a great touch.

Mepo
Feb 24, 2019
    I'm guessing the clouds were welcome. The high contrast shot gives me a sense of oppressive heat. Well done.

aoc46
Feb 23, 2019
    Well-composed, but the dramatic sky overwhelms the rest. Consider increasing brightness, saturation, contrast in the street scene and buildings.

kerszkavet
Feb 23, 2019
    The clouds look a bit over-processed for my liking, but apologies if that is what they really looked like.

I'm interested in the buildings on the left and wonder if there was a shot of the sky that made more of them as a foreground?

Maike13
Feb 23, 2019
    Pretty scene, but I'd like it better without the car.

Jade O.
Feb 23, 2019
    You need the car right where it is. A lovely urban landscape shot of a small town I assume. There is a lot of effective use of technique here but it is so subtle that I expect many voters will miss just how good this is. The one quibble is the blown highlights on the car and in the cloud which hurt this a lot. This might have called for a careful use of HDR to keep the natural look but squash the glare.

ysal
Feb 22, 2019
    The sky is amazing. I sort of wish you had cropped out the street and just kept the building and tree tops under that awesome sky.

SteveBee
Feb 21, 2019
    The title suggests the clouds are what attracted you to shoot this image. I love images of the sky and clouds. Here though I feel like the composition isn't featuring the sky. The auto coming towards the viewer is the first attention getter, then the old buildings on the left, and finally the sky. The composition really needs to be simplified in my opinion. The old buildings have character. All the parked cars are a bit problematic. I might try to find an angle to get just the building(s) or part of them isolated against the sky with a wide angle lens.
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