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  #152 View From the Window
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Backyard visitors       ©2015 Peanut
Panasonic DMC-FZ70       24th place, 5 points
1/59s, f5, ISO 320, 114mm, Normal Program, Pattern, no flash
 
Post-Processing: Cropped and adjusted levels.       Extra Info: This was taken through the window with a fly screen.
 
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Lo
Jan 25, 2015
    It must be nice to see such lovely birds at your feeder. I don't find the screen a problem, but I think including both birds splits the focus too much. Also, the blue and white shed is a distraction.

Mepo
Jan 25, 2015
    I'm guessing the fly screen has softened the shot and it needs to be corrected vertically. There is a lot of action with the various birds going on and I can appreciated why you wanted to include them all, they must be fun to watch. My choice would be a zoom in on the beautiful bird on the big feeder on the left - that's worth a photo all on it's own.

johncomyn
Jan 24, 2015
    Screen and camera shake have combined for quite a soft image, does not help that your subjects are far away. Maybe focusing on only one of them would help.

Jade O.
Jan 24, 2015
    I might have shot just one bird and zeroed in on one or the other. There are a few technical issues aside from composition as it looks like the image is off-level.

aoc46
Jan 24, 2015
    The screen does give some sense of looking out a window, though not enough IMO. Also I'd want to crop or change camera angle to lose the blue thing at right and give attention to straightening/perspective correction.

forkcandles
Jan 23, 2015
    the fly screen makes a nice filter. the objects in the title are overpowered by the large amount of background

Elyod
Jan 23, 2015
    Some straightening would help to bring the shot to vertical.
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