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  #152 View From the Window
Entry 11 of 28
   
 
Crazed       ©2015 Jade O.
Panasonic DMC-FZ30       11th place, 69 points
2s, f9, ISO 200, 210mm, Manual, Spot, no flash
 
Post-Processing: Layers (focus on instrument cluster and window shot separately, same camera location).       Extra Info: "...the window should be one that you look out from for a major part of the day... " This is a window where I spend a major part of the day looking out.
 
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Jade O.
Jan 27, 2015
    Thank you for all your votes and comments. Each one is appreciated.

johncomyn
Jan 26, 2015
    You had my second place vote here, took me awhile to warm up to it, the more I looked the more I liked.

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A.N.Other
Jan 26, 2015
    Nice attempt. I like it, though maybe if you cloned the instrument cluster closer to the bottom of the lights, cropped the photo off where most of the lights stop and crop a good chunk off the sides too it may have more drama with less black space. If you had done a 3-4 second exposure the lights would probably have been long enough to reach the top of the frame, but then hindsight is a wonderful thing ;-). GL.

Jade O.
Jan 26, 2015
    Thanks, Lo. Maybe a little cliche but it worked out o.k.

Lo
Jan 26, 2015
    Great colour - lots of movement - and a good interpretation of the theme.

Jade O.
Jan 26, 2015
    Mercury Yes, it is zoom with slow shutter which together with the moving vehicle combines to create the light streak effect. I agree it is cliche so I was a little adverse to it myself, but it was the second last day and I was out of time so one shot and thought, This will have to do.

Zhaark
Jan 26, 2015
    I am not a big fan of the motion (zoom?) blur. To me a stationary shot would have worked better. (just my opinion)
The way you've blended the two images in, are nicely done! I would have believed its taken in one shot. -if the speed and ref counters were blurred :-)

Jade O.
Jan 25, 2015
    aoc46 Not a bad suggestion but any lower and the lens would be behind the steering wheel.

Phil99 Others suggested omitting the instruments, and I can see doing it both ways.

aoc46
Jan 25, 2015
    Cool! I like the colors and the contrast between the tidiness of the gauges and the wildness of the light lines. Bringing the two closer together via a lower camera angle might enhance the composition.

Phil99
Jan 25, 2015
    Like it. The contrast between the still dashboard and the moving lights is really good.

Jade O.
Jan 24, 2015
    Thanks, Michael. I just lucked out on my first try. Usually I have to shoot a dozen to get the hang of what I'm after but this one worked.

Mepo
Jan 24, 2015
    Just the right amount of open asphalt to get a sense of where you are and fabulous colour display. Very lively shot and certainly on theme. I like it a lot.

Jade O.
Jan 24, 2015
    johncomyn A positive vote from you means a lot. I thought the instrument cluster was needed to emphasize this is in keeping with the Challenge topic, but I also like the instrument cluster in and of itself as my thinking was it helps tell the story and put the viewer in the driver's seat so to speak.

johncomyn
Jan 24, 2015
    I really like this one! Great car trails, I think the 2 second exposure was just right. I would like this better without the instrument cluster, maybe just with the hump of the dash and raise the shadows a little in that area.

Jade O.
Jan 24, 2015
    Steve Thanks. My thought was simply to try to get a shot that worked. Now that you mention it, it would be interesting to see what different angles could do.

fc Wish I had a chance to shoot from a bike. Love to see your image in outtakes if you can upload that old Poloraid.

SteveBee
Jan 23, 2015
    It's interesting and creative. I like the color and movement in the lights. I would like the instrument cluster to be more prominent. And since you were combining images you might even have cheated a little and used different camera angles.

forkcandles
Jan 23, 2015
    cor this brings back memories. I used a poloroid camera and held the open the shutter with gaffer tape and black card over the lenses mounted on the handle bars of my motorbike and rode home.
an alternative to the layers would have been an nd filter across the bottom bit of the lens. a good result anyway

Jade O.
Jan 23, 2015
    Thanks, Robert. It was a last minute effort. First shot and it worked!

RobertLavker
Jan 23, 2015
    extremely creative. I love the sense of motion. Very well done.

Jade O.
Jan 23, 2015
    Esther, Glad someone likes it!

QueenEsther
Jan 23, 2015
    I love the crazy lights!
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