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  #154 Road
Entry 14 of 20
   
 
Overpass       ©2015 cookiejar
Panasonic DMC-FZ7       14th place, 67 points
1/160s, f6.3, ISO 80, 36mm, Manual, Pattern, no flash
 
Post-Processing: Adjusted levels, crop, blemish repair and resize for entry.       Extra Info: None
 
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RobertLavker
Mar 9, 2015
    I am surprised this did not do better. It is a great shot!

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davep56
Mar 9, 2015
    Colour is off-putting but love the lines of the road way

Jade O.
Mar 8, 2015
    Like the twinning subject, like the framing, like the composition, hate the colour. The bluish cast looks really "off". Maybe a white balance issue? Setting set for indoor?

dk
Mar 8, 2015
    Visually interesting though I think composition may have been improved a bit by cropping out the distracting clutter on ground (both foreground and all the way back to the trucks i.e., about bottom 1/4 of image, and then tighten up right side a bit for proportion). Need work on white balance; greenish sky and over-blueish

Elyod
Mar 8, 2015
    IMO it's too blue, but I like the sense of height that the photo conveys, and the sweeping curve of the roadway. In my TT.

Lo
Mar 7, 2015
    A very powerful shot, well composed. The colour of the sky seems to be a bit off.

aoc46
Mar 7, 2015
    Like the choise of perspective and composition. Shooting at another time with low sun angle perhaps would add some interesting light and shadow to the undersides of the roadway.

RobertLavker
Mar 7, 2015
    Absolutely love the perspective and this is a novel treatment of the theme. My problem with this image is blue color, which does not look natural and is somewhat distracting. None the less in my TT.

kerszkavet
Mar 7, 2015
    I really like your subject and composition.
my only concern is the colour and lighting - whether it would have been possible to play with shadows and highlights to tone down the contrast slightly on the left pillars. the sky appears almost too turquoise.

But I imagine that exposure was really tough on taking this, and frankly the interesting viewpoint and subject makes it a favourite for me.

forkcandles
Mar 6, 2015
    this is screaming for black and white. the blue does not work
also a horizontal flip would have got the curve to lead you out of the picture

breadmaker
Mar 6, 2015
    Great angle and lovely shot in my favourites. Pity that all the activity going on couldn't have been excluded but that's being picky!

SteveBee
Mar 5, 2015
    Theme - 5
Composition - 3 Like the curve between the roads. Would have preferred a portrait format rather than square and slightly wider to include base of columns
Technical - 2 Whites are clipped and color is way off
Originality - 4 Like the perspective from under the road
Overall impression - 4 Interesting view point and lines
Edited on Mar 6, 2015

Mepo
Mar 5, 2015
    I would crop/clone at the bottom to remove as much ground as possible, it doesn't add to the photo. Perhaps reduce the blue cast also. I think you have captured the strength of the structure very well. Love the two front columns dominating the whole and the unusual open strip between the two structures accentuates the curve adds a lot to the composition. Good eye!
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