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  #163 Paper
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Abstract in Rolled Paper       ©2015 Jade O.
Panasonic DMC-FZ30       3rd place, 160 points
1/30s, f2.8, ISO 100, 35mm, Normal Program, Pattern, no flash
 
Post-Processing: Curves to pop the contrast a bit. Cloned out lens flare spot.       Extra Info: None
 
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Jade O.
Sep 29, 2015
    Thank you oof; that's very kind. It sort of evoked a sense of Henry Moore without the angles but either way I'm pleased it worked for you.

And thank you all again for the additional comments. Each one is appreciated.

ysal
Sep 29, 2015
    This is a beautiful image, no question. However, it didn't strike me as "paper" so much. Somehow it looked too organic (like a peeled vegetable).

out_of_focus
Sep 29, 2015
    it is a superb photo.. exhibition quality one

jomari
Sep 28, 2015
    Congratulations on 3rd place. I like this very much and it was my number 2.

mrsawyer
Sep 28, 2015
    Bravo Jade O!

Lo
Sep 28, 2015
    This one slipped by me - glad to see a lot of others saw its potential. Congratulations.

Jade O.
Sep 28, 2015
    Thank you Bill. I'm surprised both did so well to be honest.

All the same, I thank everyone for their votes and comments. Each one is appreciated.

wrosenthal
Sep 28, 2015
    Nice to see I was right on this one, at least. Congrats on the win on the other side, but I actually like this one better. Good job all around!

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Jade O.
Sep 28, 2015
    Mepo Have no concerns, you guessed right and you're a good egg....

Mepo
Sep 27, 2015
    I would not have guessed it was a roll of paper; it looks more like an egg shape. The large outer surface appears to be wider than the unrolled tape on the left. Also the tape on the left has a soft shadow on one side and a hard curve on the other with no matching surface behind it. Technically very good. Love all the soft tones, the sweeping curves and the reflection. My comments are overly detailed since I'm guessing I know where this was hatched.

Jade O.
Sep 27, 2015
    Old Finn I feel I'm still falling short probably in the PP.

babysister Yes I didn't use a tripod and shot only inches from the subject.

Old Finn
Sep 27, 2015
    Interesting still life with those curves. In my favorites.

babysister
Sep 27, 2015
    In my favs. Would have like the foreground to be in focus.

Jade O.
Sep 26, 2015
    Bill, thanks. And don't be sorry, feel free to just roll out the puns....

mrsawyer The only thing other than the paper is the surface and the reflection in it. However, when I went with curves I created some artifacts. Shot in colour but white paper on a white surface with the light coloured wall in the background.

Neil You are right, of course, about the distracting elements. I blame it on lack of time to do a proper job of things!
Edited on Sep 26, 2015

wrosenthal
Sep 26, 2015
    Well executed b&w study with an interesting twist (sorry). I like the comp and lighting. A favorite.
Edited on Sep 26, 2015

mrsawyer
Sep 26, 2015
    A well-done abstract. Did you shoot this in monochrome? The reflection makes the image.

Update: On my second look through, I was curious about the grey thing under the paper roll. What is it? Why is it there?
Edited on Sep 26, 2015

A.N.Other
Sep 26, 2015
    This one did my eyes in! It took me quite a while to work out what I was seeing but I think I've got it now :-) .

I can't make up my mind if I'd have removed the purple and green colours which are possibly the product of chromatic aberration? maybe it is better with them. What is the dark grey shape under the roll of paper? I wish that wasn't there as it draws my eyes. GL.

Jade O.
Sep 26, 2015
    Thanks jomari. I keep thinking this could be so much better. I'm guessing some will like it and many more will think it was a missed shot but we will see.

jomari
Sep 25, 2015
    A lovely, subtle abstract. Well placed in my favourites.

Jade O.
Sep 25, 2015
    fc Thanks.

AC B&W made it too flat. I really would have preferred a greater dynamic range, at least with the whites, but frankly I did both entries in a rush and didn't spend time on playing with the PP to make this one work better.

forkcandles
Sep 25, 2015
    well on theme and well executed

Anthony Comyn
Sep 25, 2015
    Lovely shapes, very intriguing image. Almost abstract. Did you consider converting to black and white? This would have eliminated the purple and violet hues. Still in my favourites, excellent image!
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