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  #126 Abstracts
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Forsythia Bushes near the RR Tracks       ©2013 Amberbug
Panasonic DMC-FZ50       35th place, 0 points
1/8s, f11, ISO 100, 64mm, Shutter Priority, Pattern, no flash
 
Post-Processing: Crop, Adj Cont, Resize       Extra Info: None
 
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NEAT
May 6, 2013
    I see what you were trying to achieve with this, I just think it looks a little to cluttered especially the top left hand side with the cars etc in the image. I think you should of gone with either just the train tracks, or the bushes to the side, I can see some abstract motion in the branches that are much more appealing to me. Also it lacks contrast and vibrancy.

Cheers

Neat

mrsawyer
May 5, 2013
    Good scene you've chosen! Though this is an abstract, I keep wanting to see the cross ties. (Perhaps picky on my part!) Did you also try lateral camera movement instead of vertical? I'm curious as to how that turned out if you did.

Lo
May 3, 2013
    Very interesting effect - the soft neutrals really work well

cookiejar
May 3, 2013
    Nicely composed and attractive colours. It has a painterly feel to it. Not really abstract.

Jade O.
May 3, 2013
    I get the impressionist vision but really dislike the composition and the sense that this is mostly just camera shake; looks more like a missed shot but clearly fits the category of abstract and I think it is more the subject than the technique which seems to have been appropriately applied.

BarbroS
May 3, 2013
    I like the composition and expressionist treatment. But is it really abstract?

forkcandles
May 3, 2013
    i assume from the 8s exposure it was hand held or the trains was heading your way behind you. like it very much if more yellow in it

LaRee
May 2, 2013
    Another wonderful surreal image. I like it. I am surprised you got to this with just adjusting contrast. I see the slow shutter. I guess this is motion blur. It works well.
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