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  Mini#54 Leading Lines 		Entry 3 of 18
   
 
Storm Approaches       ©2022 SteveBee
Panasonic DC-G9       3rd place, 103 points
1/4000s, f5.6, ISO 200, 56mm, Normal Program, Center Weighted Average, no flash
 
Post-Processing: Processed raw file in Lightroom and converted to B&W.       Extra Info: A railroad running through downtown with summertime storm clouds above the skyline.
 
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Lo
Aug 23, 2022		     Beautiful detail. Congratulations on a great shot.
ysal
Aug 23, 2022		     Another effective use of B&W. The beautiful leading lines don't get lost in distracting color. Congrats.
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Edward
Aug 22, 2022		     Nice leading lines are there. Good image resolution and textures with the background buildings and clouds. However there is so much going on, it creates a bit of chaos and detracts from the leading line effect of the RR tracks. Still high in my vote.
jomari
Aug 22, 2022		     Strong leading lines - and an awesome sky.
babysister
Aug 21, 2022		     The leading lines are good but I eye went straight to the beautiful but dominant clouds.
Lo
Aug 21, 2022		     The detail in the sky is wonderful, and the monochrome treatment works really well. I find the lines lead my eye to the train and then onward to the turbulent sky. I do wish the train were a bit more prominent. A bit of a crop perhaps?
aoc46
Aug 21, 2022		     The clouds, especially at the right, are the star of this scene, and the rails help take the eye there. Consider darkening or otherwise deemphasizing those buildings and other elements that don't help guide the viewer toward the bright clouds.
Mepo
Aug 20, 2022		     The monochrome works for me. The sky is impressive. The rails doing a good job of leading the eye in.
ysal
Aug 20, 2022		     With everything else going on, such as all the buildings and dramatic clouds, the tracks stand still out as the main subject.
forkcandles
Aug 20, 2022		     a nice monochrome with good skies and buildings . the leading lines of the railroad a little bit lost I would have cropped the sky along the base of the sky where the black shape appears on the LH side
Maike13
Aug 19, 2022		     Very effective use of black and white.
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